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Random Poem:

Danger Of The Daylight
devilsbelboy

It's hard mama, it's so damn hard
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For the rain to wash away the tears
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An' yes, O Poppa, I done did yes
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I've tried to drink away the fears
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The danger of the daylight
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is overwhelming as it beats on down you
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It's more than stagefright
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And the appaulse can't come too soon
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It's hard Lord, yes it is so hard
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My tears they just fall like rain
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An' yes Holy Mother, yes they do
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Fall to only seperate brother Cain
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The danger of the daylight
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Frightens blood pumping in our veins
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It's more than a disease
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That makes us all want to stay
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Danger O Brother Danger
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The Belly of The Beast
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Warm air behind my neck
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Lord I can feel the heat
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It's hard Mama, it's so very hard
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Laughter, that you never knew as pain
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Yes Lord Jesus, yes, I can see
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That there's no one left to blame
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The danger of the daylight
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Has got my ghosts running in circles
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It's more than just loss of love
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It's getting through all of her hurdles
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