poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Youth *("OBama Tribute")*
MattPat

Youth.
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What is young?
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And what is youth?
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Dancing between nothings.
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Always reposed, always remade.
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Love nothing say with shy voices.
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Play love with someone unimportant.
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All of my life has been in the same place.
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Wherever the location, my existence is now.
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The dust beyond dust beyond atoms, beyond etc. (Nothing! Consciousness!!)
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I feel them in my imagination. My mind is powerful.
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Seeing the ocean. Life seems epic. Nothing terrifying.
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The ocean of It, existence, and the seas of man,
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Death is epic to me, the end of me. No I.
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I have not lost the dancing. Only love.
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Infinity is infinity at any point truth.
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And behind my eyes is that youth.
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And so are you, and everything.
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Nothing is ultimate death.
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But I am now today.
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Death in Life:
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Youth.
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