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Random Poem:

The Thirty-Third of July
dmartin

Hate mail,
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on the thirty-third of July,
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made me feel warm and I thought
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it was ironic that roses have thorns.
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And the words traveled,
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                                  fell really,
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from one line to the next,
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and I'm sure that I'm not sure
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any of it made sense,
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but I felt accomplished.
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I like this true last day in July,
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how it fades leaves,
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and snows on all the apples in the trees.
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They soon came to terms with the ground,
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                                                             fell really,
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from thin arms that couldn't bear to hold on,
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it was ironic how that tree was like a mother.
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Hate mail,
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on the thirty-third day of July,
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and I thought,
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                    fell really.
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