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A Ryhme to The Architect
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Oh Architect who is so wise and who so graciously made me,
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I come to you on hands and knees to sing to Thee.
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Please oh please oh Architect come to meet with me,
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for my heart needs reopening and only you have the key.
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Hallowed be your name,
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your Kingdom come your will be done on earth as it is in heaven.
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I come to you as a beggar for forgiveness,
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knowing that your my father full of love and kindness.
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Build me up higher than the mountain tops,
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construct my heart so I may be what I Ought.
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For it is you that I long for and it is you that I seek,
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and I hope that forever you'll carry me.
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There are times where I am barely hanging on
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to the rope that we call life that seems to go on and on.
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I know this rope is short and that the prize is very long,
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please help me to see eternal Oh how I sing you this song!
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Oh Architect is this a part of your Plan,
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to make me and change me into this Man?
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Your Son how he was so perfect and so humble
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sometimes the weight of that makes my heart tear and crumble.
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How can I be like this Man I am not perfect?!
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Im a sinner so quite the opposite.
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So build me into this Man,
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and mold me like no one else can.
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For it is this that I long for and it is this that I seek,
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to be more like Jesus so humble and meek.
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Oh God you are sovereign and all that you plan,
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can not be frustrated or even cramped.
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So why do I worry and why do I doubt,
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like a man blown around and tossed about?
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For you are the grand Architect who sees
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and speaks everything, including me, to be.
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You make it and shape it new and old,
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to interwork in your plan foretold.
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I love that about you that there is no surprise,
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you know all already what lies inside,
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my head and my heart. Those are yours for the taking,
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to do all that you do in my story you're making.
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You are the Architect, oh Architect,
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and I am the simple and yet,
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you still continue to love me and nurture my soul,
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your love for me can never be fully told.
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I love you God, three in one,
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Oh Father, Spirit, Son!
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My life is nothing with out your supreme guidance,
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Id just be rebellious and defiant.
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So God I thank you for what you do and who you are.
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I pray that you will never be to far!
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The last thing that ask from you is,
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to lead me out of my temptations.
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Deliver me from evil,
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if it is truly and only your will.
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For thine is the kingdom, the power and glory, Forever and ever.
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Amen.
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