poetry critical

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Random Poem:

My Secret
AsheePooh

I have a secret that I have to confess.
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I can tell everyone in the world except you.
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Ain’t that a mess?
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It’s hard to tell the truth about how I feel.
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Yet, everyone else says it shows.
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But it’s so hard to unleash a beast that seems so unreal.
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My feelings for you change vigorously from time to time.
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You can call it an emotional roller coaster.
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It always taunts my mind.
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I think it’s funny for you to adore someone like me.
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I never thought someone could love me so much.
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How could that be?
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When you told me how you felt I thought it was a reproduction of a fake line.
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But through the country curves of your annunciation I knew you were genuine.
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Some how I knew that our hearts had intertwined.
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The secret is no secret at all really it is just hard to say clearly or do.
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It takes a lot to fix my mouth and to say…
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I love you.
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