poetry critical

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Random Poem:

the day was very backwards
Inuki

Now I can never touch the bitch again.
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I really don't blame her for leaving
 2
And she cried and screamed with pain,
 3
So I took her outside and beat her,
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Overall she just didn't care.
 5
She didn't care if my name was Keith,
 6
She didn't care about my hair,
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She didn't care about my teeth,
 8
 
 
Or even that I smelled like a skunk,
 9
It didn't matter that I hit her,
 10
It didn't matter that I was drunk.
 11
It didn't matter at the tattoo parlor,
 12
 
 
Whether I was leader or the pawn,
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And I bravely ventured on,
 14
But she smiled as she spoke,
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I am the only one who can cause the pain.
 16
 
 
And now I find there is no one to blame,
 17
Will I ever be the same?
 18
I ask you once, I ask you twice,
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A broken chin, only added to the pain.
 20
 
 
With scraped up knees, and
 21
Lying on a curb, in an alley
 22
Somehow you found me,
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Whether by luck of if by chime
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I still don't quite understand.
 25
The day was a strange one
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I will tell you how it began
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The day was very backwards
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