poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Protracted (An Exodus)
ShadowedWave

Tunes of memories which inflict these longing lacerations
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A labyrinth of horizons which hasten all sensations
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Sleepless and dreamless my heart skips a song
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Soundless wisdom my heartache distant and long
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And there you are only the glass between silent screams
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As I lean in for that kiss I missed it seems
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I can feel the smooth soft touch of your lips
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The sweet touch of reminisce
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And I long for your touch once again
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As my heart stings and stiffens, the missing begins
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The light of remembrance clicks and draws on
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The memory of your eyes watching me
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gives hope for another dawn
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And there you go from this frozen stream of feelings
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A daydream in the moonlight sky
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The sun shone bright under a coat of saddened sighs
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So I miss you already
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