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Random Poem:

mispellings of the wind
DeformedLion

if i were myself right now
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i'd probably be underneath the traffic.
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not that i am chirped out in suicide,
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just can't trumpet this blues,
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jus of wine
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i am red meat dined upon
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blind locust of life,
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not that there is sense in this- or that.
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i held you in my arms too long
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that you were dust by morning,
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had to vacuum you up.
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felt sorry for the carpet.
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was left in mourning.
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the irony of daylight is palpable,
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it leeches from my thoughts,
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not daylight nor even irony,
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but the odd toss in turn.
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you grave to me a wooden
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suit so that i could wear this world
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on my sleeves, but all i could do was spin
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in it, and that grew more tiresome than
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the leaves dangling from my ears.
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my solar plexus- i don't know what that is,
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you said it was mighty...i knew you weren't
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talking soul (trash) but someone who smiles
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punk will never see the comedy of love,
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only the faint whispers of its threnody,
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that i have left you is the only cry-
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   remains long in the wind--
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does not die like me, this thing of
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burst balloons and scattered petals.
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& i may have looked for you in the
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muted screams of a tyre print,
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or read your mind in the imprint
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of sand to shoe,
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but the wind has come before me,
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and will again for you.
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