poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Chance
treerain

I thought maybe I might have a chance
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when I looked at you and you smiled
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What you said and what I felt,
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it made me hope that one day
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you might grant we my one wish
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I can't convey my mind, I know
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you get confused when you’re listening to me
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but I’m getting confused when I’m talking
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So if I don’t make sense-
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I’ve listened to you
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and I think I want to know you
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I've watched you bloom
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into this beauty that I can only
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imagine to touch
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Though it's only been a little while
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I know I want to feel you
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right here where my heart is racing
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Pounding out of my chest
 18
I have no idea what to say
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I don't know what you'll tell me
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but I’m talking to you
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I hope this comes out okay
 22
I’m trembling all over
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I wonder what you feel
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I can only hope that you aren’t laughing
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'cause I can’t see your face,
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can’t hear your voice
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And this moment just isn’t passing
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