poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Those Summer Days
dreamergirl

We walked through the trees
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in the park nearby on those summer days,
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you always noticed the colour
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of the flowers in the garden,
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how they popped against
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the dark earth and the green grass.
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On those days when the hot air
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felt like it would burn through my bare skin,
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you would buy me ice cream
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to cut the heat,
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we'd stand under the biggest tree,
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hiding in the shade.
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We'd walk to the little creek
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and sit on a log,
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dangling our feet in the cool water.
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I'd tell you stories
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that would make you happy,
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sad, angry and everything in between.
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Then you'd walk me home,
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our shoes slung over our shoulders,
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bare feet slapping the concrete.
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You were always flitting
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in and out of my life,
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like a firefly at twilight.
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