poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Exhausted.
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Exhausted from it all,
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  falling into the sheets, I
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close my eyelids;
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                                       Only to smell you.
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Wafting through the miles,
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  drifting through my sleep, I am
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haunted by your face;
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                                      Because you’re all I see.
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Even during the instant replay,
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  softly cursed by regret, I am
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falling down once again;
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                                      Dropped by the past.
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The times we shared together,
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  not just in your presence,
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but somehow connected;
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                                       That which we have lost...
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Never to smell you again
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  or to see your face...
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Forever without you;
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                                      I am fallen from grace.
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