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Random Poem:

Regret Bloody Regret!
ACE

To My Beloved Elizabeth.
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Your beauties indescribable,
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     Your smile innocently set my heart aflame.
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Your gaze caused my soul to tremble.
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     My emotions, I found unable to tame.
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You descended into my life as if a dove,
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     Such a blessing to breathe your essence.
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It seemed to me a match fitting as a glove.
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     If only I could withstand your holy presence.
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Not worthy of your affection,
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     I soon began to shrink.
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A wave of love and passion,
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     Brought my tears to brink.
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How could god release such a treasure,
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     To such a filthy world?
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How could he expect me to maintain this pleasure?
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     His pure kindness had been impearled.
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Elizabeth, even though you knew me not,
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     You had been the wife of my dreams.
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You had been there when I cried, and my tears you caught.
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     With your sweet disposition, you soothed my screams.
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If only I had seized the opportunity,
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     Taken the moment for what it was worth.
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We could have had such gorgeous unity,
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     I would have a new life,
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     It would have been rebirth.
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