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Random Poem:

Your universe compressed
mhdashraf

Reiterate
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all the things that
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leave us irate and
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contemplating rigid hate
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as we fill out existential fates
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with false pharma
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and flaccid debate
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about the  truth in karma;
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its eventual compensate
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of the moral life with the
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empty plate and the
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greeted injustice of
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our worldy state.
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Ring back to chromosomal
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similarities and forget the
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abnormalities of defects grown
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old to the bone with cliches
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of a time that was
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known as the dark age
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of man's short reign
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as His best of creation;
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the better nombs in a garden
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of turmoil until our whips
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began to show.
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World's too big for me to complain;
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Let alone pretend to share the pain,
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So I'll reflect my emotions
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on you; my plain-to-see desire
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of a ranting perception and
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beg Him who created you so
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flawed to make me naive
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and eternally distraught over
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your 6 inch universe for
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whom I am God
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..........
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