poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Franks Lament
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He took all his predictions out and splashed them on her couch,
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lips loosened at the sound of her dressing or undressing as she pleased,
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sometimes you need a rolling around on the fires of lust,
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there were children standing still,
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their eyes perched at broken windows,
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they observed the many colored wonders,
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the celebration of ancient cravings,
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laid out before them,
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this was better than dragon flies they kept in jars,
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her wish was for those moans,
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the calls of satisfaction were his,
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the strangest pony went up and down,
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the children had to cheer they could not hold it in,
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with all their support poor Frank could not either,
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while staining the couch of his predictions,
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her demons unfulfilled,
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she lashed out at the man who could not perform,
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the children howled at the finish of this scene of frustration a 100 years ago.
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mike hendershot 2010
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