poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Like Busted Glass
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A picture made in glass
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was once you and me.
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The glass is now shattered
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my roaming pain is free.
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Free to end my life,
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Ruin me again,
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Take the busted shards
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and cut my life away.
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A noose hangs from the tree.
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The pattern made in glass
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I see our broken faces,
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Our hearts are beaten black.
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I'll put the pieces back
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that's fallen on the floor.
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Mend it back together.
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My life iis still sore,
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I'll close my eyes again
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I'll take a final look
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Shed my last tear for you
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and slowly close the book.
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Take what you've left me here dying.
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A broken shard that keeps me crying.
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Will our blood mend our picture together again?
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Or will time tell me to let go...
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