poetry critical

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Random Poem:

I'm the child.
LoserXcore

Once again,
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I'm left with a loss for words,
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while you've got a loss for me.
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The words "I hate you"
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fall from your mouth,
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as my breathing
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continues to slow.
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Breathless yet again.
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You can sweet talk your way
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out of anything and you talk
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as if you've experienced everything
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in the world that there is to go through.
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So when I stumbled upon something
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that phased me, you acted as if i
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was only a child.
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   [[You said age NEVER mattered.]]
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You don't bother to help me along
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the way, you only ridicule me.
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[[You acted better then that.
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                ...I thought you were.]]
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but once again,
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I'm the fool.
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I'm the child.
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