poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Severity
kripto

Colder then the coldest
 1
harder than a diamond on ice
 2
death like a thousand possibilities
 3
possibility like the one thats not nice
 4
 
 
I've been feelin a little
 5
Like a little feeling of death
 6
kissing my neck
 7
Like an old girlfriend freezing to death
 8
 
 
I'm like oh, why did you have to come up
 9
I've been alone for so long
 10
and in the beginning it was miserable
 11
But then I took up a passion
 12
And that passion is song
 13
 
 
Can you read me like literature
 14
Oh you never had a book?, you are literally poor
 15
Illiterate maybe, like a crackhead from birth
 16
relatable, maybe like a significant curse
 17
 
 
I don't know, and I don't really care
 18
you can judge me till the world comes to an end
 19
Cause all I ever do here is pretend
 20
I'm so sad, and I feel alone even though
 21
They say I have a million friends
 22
 
 
Can you just back off
 23
And give me some room,
 24
let me breath please and get out my room
 25
I feel like I barely have any in my cocoon
 26
 
 
Metamorphisis can you feel me
 27
I feel as if this really
 28
not something real like reality
 29
A manipulation of time and personality
 30
 
 
I'm tired, I wanna retire
 31
get fired, come back and get hired
 32
I'm flyer then the flyest around
 33
But the higher I get, the faster I'm down
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