poetry critical

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Random Poem:

this is how the world falls apart (you're to blame)
dmartin

Did you want the epitome, the solace quiet of a funeral,
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the way the tears awkwardly fall
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and you search for the one person
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who is looking for you, to confirm others hurt too.
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At story’s end, no one concluded a war of the worlds,
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not this way, a fuse lit at both ends
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where the crossfire left those who were innocent
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suddenly feeling guilty for being there.
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The parts of the world broke into more parts of the world,
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and a puzzle formed that God himself
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didn’t want to piece together,
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clearly it was our turn to decide the fate.
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Just like Him, we began to make the effort,
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and gave up somewhere near half way,
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I saw you thinking to yourself that it wasn’t worth it,
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the remains of the war would have to do.
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