poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Broken
thegrinch

Hands are freezing
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Finger tips frozen
 2
Legs crossed
 3
Thinking about why my stomach hurts
 4
Is it your fault?
 5
Is it my pride's fault?
 6
Is it the fact that I must wait for him again?
 7
 
 
 
 
Then he confuses me
 8
Tells me I am grand
 9
Wonderful and a real fire-cracker
 10
Then says he doesn't deserve me
 11
I don't get it
 12
Does it mean he likes me?
 13
Or, does it mean he doesn't think he should?
 14
Does he think I'm a bad idea
 15
I will never know what he is thinking
 16
I can only assume
 17
 
 
 
 
Lost once more
 18
Behind your eyes of contempt
 19
Do you hate me?
 20
Or is that really me there
 21
Standing among the crowd
 22
The crowd of angry villagers
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I can feel the fire burning
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I can smell my life passing before my eyes
 25
And I stare
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I stare at the broken image of you
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