poetry critical

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Random Poem:

A more united nation
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What's wrong with the world?
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What happened to hope for unity?
 2
We had dreams of equality
 3
Didn't we want tranquility?
 4
Whatever happened?
 5
Now it's all bout violence
 6
Trying to claim dominance
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By destruction of innocent ones
 8
They want revenge on hated ones
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Why is there so much hate anyway?
 10
What causes people to be hated on everyday?
 11
There's so much tension jealousy can create
 12
It leads to anger which leads to hate
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And violence is what it all comes to
 14
Believing in themselves is what people should do
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Take out all the feelings of insecurity
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It can cause a sense of unity
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Bring people to think of one another
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Bring people to love each other
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It can solve so many problems
 20
If people could jus stop hateration
 21
We need to stop discrimination
 22
Imagine how the world would be
 23
We got to wake up and see
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That we need love to surpass hate
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We're definitely going to have to wait
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But I could wait a lifetime in anticipation
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To see the world in a different more united nation
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