poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Low_Rat_Girl (didn't know the price she'd have to pay)
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Low_Rat_Girl
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didn't know the price she'd have to pay.
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She clings to words
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in place of conversation. She is so
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clenched tight;
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upright;
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black tears streaming down her cheeks.
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He is gone.
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He's gone
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so long
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with pieces of her clutched in his fists
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like glowing embers
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he flies
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from the edge as she cries
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he dies.
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She spills diamonds
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from her lips
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in a bloody grin
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(she tries to keep them in);
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all the words she didn't say.
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Low_Rat_Girl, here is
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The Price You Have To Pay.
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