poetry critical

online poetry workshop

Current Stats
  • poems: 49,089 (6,635 active)
  • comments: 316,267
  • ratings: 115,968
  • average rating: 7.6
  • forum posts: 225,078
  • users: 10,134 (77 active)
  • current users: 0

Welcome!

Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

House of Glass.
IPlayBass

I'm seen as a monster, with lies and deceit,
 1
Distorting reality, but I run in defeat.
 2
The stone in your eyes, shatters so fast,
 3
Frail are these walls, my house of glass.
 4
 
 
I glitter and gleam, in skies of defeat,
 5
You threw me a bone, I crumbled beneath.
 6
Flutter and flip, through air of the past,
 7
I speak only truth, my house of glass.
 8
 
 
Catch as I fly, and never let go,
 9
My evil will shine, and see you as foe.
 10
I seem so fragile, I trick and trap,
 11
Anyone and everyone, my house of glass.
 12
 
 
I taste your flesh, so wonderfully sweet,
 13
I dine on despair, of trembling defeat.
 14
Within our mass, the magic I cast,
 15
Rendered you breathless, my house of glass.
 16
 
 
Your house is by mine, my fortress of glass,
 17
I'll plague all your luck,  and burn down your past.
 18
When I'm needed most, control me I dare,
 19
You'll know my name, as folk of the fair.
 20

(comment on this poem)


0.346s