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Random Poem:

Preemie aka Mothers Touch
Isabelle5

Her baby cried,
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born early and unfinished,
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not ready to be thrust
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into oxygen and light,
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with gossamer lungs
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and skin too new and blue to touch.
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The doctor’s hands,
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the length of her small body,
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cradled cranium the size of a tennis ball
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and her feet, the length of Daddy’s fingernail,
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dusky and soft and perfect,
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tucked in as close to her
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chest as they could be.
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Cries as soft as willow tears
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billowing her fragile lungs
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and her comfort was not found
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until they laid her in her mother’s arms.
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The room grew still and silent;
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the baby’s eyes found hers,
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a tiny pinking finger held on tight.
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One sigh escaped those perfect lips
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and mother touched, with fingertips,
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the skin of silk and roses
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of her child.
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