poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

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I am the ace of swords
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based upon the only original autherized edition
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I am the ace of swords
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I am the five of hearts
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five meaning the number of grace
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hearts meaning love
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but I'm really the nine of diamonds
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yeah I might be civil sybyll
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maybe even cruella devil
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or possibly sleeping beauty
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the seven dwarfs tried to kill me
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and then they woke me with a kiss
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now I'm empty
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will you wake me with a kiss
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now I'm full
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will you feed me
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now I am whole
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don't lead me astray
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tell me the truth
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because it hurts like the sun
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(addicted to the pain)
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I burnt myself today
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to see if I could feel
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I focused on the pain
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the only thing that's real
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the needle tears a hole
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into my wretched skin
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and I cry
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everyday
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if not twice
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shrimp is joy
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be fulfilled
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