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Random Poem:

Purging the Curse
Estrella

Never been the other woman.  
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Though a tease, I've coaxed a few astray.
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You were different.
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Not giving orders,
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not asking for the profession of undying love
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you so readily offered.
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I went to cower and rationalize.
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Analyzing our lengthy saga, then
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falling flat onto an emotional affair.
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Regretting the hundreds of miles between us.
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Loathing the lack of unabashed
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*SWEATY PHEREMONES
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~fuck me already~
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NAUSEAUS CHEMICAL*
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passion that I require.
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Too trusting, forgetting to question motives, believing your every nervous verbal stumble.
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My obsession replaced your voice when you didn't call.            
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And then she called. Her, the one I've had to hate.
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The one that squandered the priceless.
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The woman who somehow slid into my broken mold.
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And when she spoke I instantly became sick.  
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Screaming at the toliet,
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hurling away the poison of loving you,
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I found myself cleansed of the lie.
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No longer petrified of the truth.
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