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Random Poem:

Penny's Dropped (revised)
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I've fallen out of like with you;
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no longer do I care
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to ride our cycles through the woods
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in search of teddy bears.
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I've fallen out of like with you;
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frustrated by your games
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of hockey in that little skirt;
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blowing in the winds of change.
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We've fallen
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under witches
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spells; thrown
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money into
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wishing wells;
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spent aeons
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collecting crabs
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and shells
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but now there's
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something I
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must tell
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I've fallen out of like with you;
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time to remove kid gloves.
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I've fallen out of like with you
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and landed up in love.
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