poetry critical

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Random Poem:

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aciissej

All alone inside of my body
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I was stalled in the position of a little girl
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My skin seemed to confine me
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I needed to break loose and into the world.
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And once when I was treading in the ocean of my life
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I was fighting to keep my head above the surface
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The bricks on my shoulders didn’t want me to survive
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But I kept on trying, ‘cause I knew the future would be worth this.
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Now the skin is tearing and I am free to escape
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And although I bleed, it’s so easy to breathe
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You have lifted these weights from my shoulders
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I swim to the shore and fall to my knees
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No longer alone and stuck in myself
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I walk proudly and uncovered, with you by my side
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Independence is present, but I know I need you in my life
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So, I am completely content with my current state,
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And wherever I go, I’ll take pride in each and every stride.
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