poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

my son, before I knew him
Seditswing

I walk him & walk him,
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in vain. New soles never touch
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new soles I  welcome. The earth
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only feels him. I, the first thing you saw, mom my
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calling for you nameless. He stretches his heavy head
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and looks for up, I give in. I am so exposed. Over drawn
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and out of sight. I make up songs
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& hum like no drunk would..
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teary, his mold struggles away
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with every averted gesture. I round
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again & turn the music up louder. It's
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my voice making song, my pace with manic prayers
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to the floor. I hold on to his crying body and briefly
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we dance in our blood---I feel through his
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new skin.
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