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Random Poem:

Fading Grasp
angelbuck

To have a grasp on something
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yet know it's so far away.
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Having once felt its warmth and protection
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just to feel it all fade one day.
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Feeling completely helpless
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when I once felt empowerment and love.
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Knowing there's nothing you can do,
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but keep push from turning to shove.
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To feel yourself changing from hurt and desperation,
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to anger, confusion, hate and rage.
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Only to watch as your life crashes down
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through the bars of your little locked cage.
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Everyone pointing and laughing,
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as your heart gets torn apart.
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A way to describe it, there is none,
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hell on earth would be a good way to start.
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Your only warmth and comfort,
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are the tears rolling off your cheek,
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as silence now takes the place
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of the kind words he used to speak.
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No longer do I feel his arms around me,
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or see the love in his eyes.
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Instead I get the cold shoulder,
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those looks have turned into despise.
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Not once an explination,
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for the aching of my soal
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or the confusion wrapped around my mind,
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spinning me out of control.
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No apology for the pain you cause,
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not once do you say you will leave,
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just utter frustration caused by you,
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and the new reality I'm forced to conceive.
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