poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Appetite Suppressant
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Vile viola wills her villainous wiles        
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into the wintery waste of her wishes        
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that need to be dishes served later        
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with the Men who Knew her menu        
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or thought they did.    
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Her appetizers dazzled the palette        
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without being palatable for general public    
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consumption.        
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So, sumptuous meals were served in dark spaces,        
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marked cases of prawn COCKtail      
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that spoiled too soon        
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leaving Viola to recoil;        
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Soiled by his maleness,        
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like stale piss        
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where the shame lingers in fermented odours    
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and cemented no worse than the words that      
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reverberated and permeated her soul:        
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“I like to sample your menu,        
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but I eat at home with my girlfriend”.        
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No six course meal here,        
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only a sick, course feel that dick once taut,        
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taught me more than I wanted to feel.
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