poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Mature Love
CheBourdain7

Autumn yellow leaves
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gets blown by the wind
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gracing the pavement
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flowing, touching your
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the scarf we bought at Target
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and probably smelling your scent.
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The sounds of dog barking,
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unexpected frisbees flying,
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young naive teenage lovers
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cuddling by the wooden bridge
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to our left
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is nothing more
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but a reflection of your smart ass grin.
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As I stroke your hair
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on this park bench,
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one stroke is all it takes.
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For you to express yourself,
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for you to ramble about your day
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about the Nancies, the Emmas
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the misters as I look
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into your eyes
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when I'm really in outer space.
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As I stroke your hair
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on this park bench,
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once more
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thats the perfect time
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to nod and smile.
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