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Random Poem:

Lone Oak
Jurmz

That siren's call did beckon then,
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The wayward soul come forth.
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Her whispered breath sings the end,
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Betrayed by stone along the shore.
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Black specter's touch above is looming,
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Spreading seed from which he reaps.
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The wretched heart is left decaying,
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With the secrets that it keeps.
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It burst and seeped into the ground,
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Through the eons gone and fore.
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And yet the seer's eyes grow blind,
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Before he'd seek that sacred door.
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Rebellion hence brims the cup,
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Crimson spilled across the floor.
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Two threads cleft becoming one,
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descendant spirit you adore.
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Sun burning brightens all of life,
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Baked the earth below lone tree.
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Wind rails about to branches strife,
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Cracked a limb there falling free.
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If it's roots should then unravel,
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The oak protests beside the sea.
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When this spire topples over,
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None are near to hear or see.
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Thus the light of day is darkened,
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By the knocking at the door.
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When twilight's gloom again awakened,
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Chained by weight regret once bore.
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Beg when cast beyond the shallow
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Face the depths with open eyes.
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Indifferent that none here can follow,
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Redeeming dawn's horizon rise.
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And with it dew of morning glistens,
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Atop weeping bed of broken switches.
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So any by the pier choose listens,
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Hears a forest's farewell wishes.
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