poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Give birth to what's inside you
mot_juste

Jamming my finger into the socket,
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hoping for an outlet
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to relieve me of this intensity,
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as electricity rushes through my body.
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You simply can't bury someone alive
 5
in hopes of protecting them;
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they'll pound on hardened walls
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with a clenched fist turned bloody,
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creating ulcers over time,
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shrugged off as growing pains.
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Like this thumping in the chest,
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audible only when the world is silent,
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mistaken for steady heartbeats.
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Let me take you to the edge
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where a human threshold exists
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urging this vein on her temple to burst,
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bulging more intensely every time
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she shrieks to be heard,
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throbbing my entire being,
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driving me to make precise incisions.
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I tear away layers of undamaged flesh
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revealing her within a hollow ribcage.
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