poetry critical

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Random Poem:

a fragment of a piece of shit
etcetera

I only cried twice
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this year
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during
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the holidays.
 4
Once
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was for a bookshelf
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which I improperly put together
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and needed to undo
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and redo.
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The other was for loving you.
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I have you, I know, I have you
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I just don't know where you went.
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You're right here, I know, you're right here,
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but I haven't seen you around for years.
 14
 
 
You don't know this kind of fear
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until it stares you in the face
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as you're closing the door on it
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mid-sentence
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trying not to.
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Knowing you shouldn't.
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The second time I cried
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during
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the holidays,
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I was afraid I would have to
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undo
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and redo
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you.
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