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Random Poem:

Awake In A Dream
Craig

I am asleep, but wide awake,
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Drifting away, but weighted down,
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Nothing here is as seemed,
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As I am awake in a dream,
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Is it real, is it fake,
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Should I smile, or should I frown,
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Never will it be seen,
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As I am awake in a dream,
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The reality is up for take,
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Where am I, here, now,
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Hidden within, all in me,
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As I am awake in a dream,
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Nothing is right here,
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All of the horrors locked away,
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What can this be,
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As I am awake in a dream,
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Growing tall is my fear,
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All of the pain here to stay,
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Why, why happen to me,
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As I am awake in a dream,
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As I huddle and cry a tear,
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When will it come, the day,
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Heart torn, all alone, crying fear, unsaved, helpless, none to hear me plea,
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As I am awake, in a dream.
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