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Random Poem:

Transforextermination
SilentCrow

I have been desecrated
 1
           And
 2
God is the rapist
 3
His phallic implement
 4
        Hypocrisy
 5
 
 
Honoring man’s gift of Free-Will
 6
A paltry excuse
 7
For looking the other way
 8
            As
 9
His black and white collared minions
 10
Armed with crucifixes and lies
 11
Deceive another innocent child
 12
 
 
          I was
 13
An opaline rabbit
 14
       –Alone-
 15
In a den of black wolves
 16
Their desired sustenance
 17
           Was
 18
Carnal depravity
 19
Each salivating beast
 20
Bit into the forbidden fruit
 21
      Their violation
 22
More hedonistic than Adam’s
 23
           Yet
 24
There is no punishment
 25
           Only
 26
Protection by the anointed ones
 27
          Whose
 28
Silver tongued sermons
 29
Speak of Jesus and love
 30
           While
 31
The black and white collared wolves run free
 32
 
 
Forty eight years
 33
             And
 34
My pain has been rendered Inescapable
 35
          Knowing
 36
Inebriation is always futile
 37
              As
 38
Copulation is eternally rapacious
 39
          Proving
 40
Satiation is forever fleeting
 41
 
 
I will remain with the tainted ones
 42
            Those
 43
Who are not granted second chances
 44
 
 
With self induced Ignorance
 45
God’s blind meme
 46
Will judge me
 47
            Then
 48
Eliminate me
 49
          Because
 50
For this child
 51
There is no transformation
 52
Only extermination
 53

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