poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Memories
milo

You are a heart-breaking picture to remember;
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that you could still have the power to dismember;
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this incandescent heart laid low at your feet,
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that annihilates the lovers who cannot compete.
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No elegiac prose could ever profess
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the smokescreen over your every caress;
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a memory encumbered with painful regret
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will crystallize despite my will to forget.
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Cordoned off, in a secret recess of my brain
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is the shadow of your body upon sheets that you'd lain.
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Lying so still, a heart trapped between beats,
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no shame nor romance; just incomplete
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with this abstract liar that builds up pretext
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  of you half in this world and half in the next.
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