poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Nairobi Alien
Eritus

Nairobi Bluz
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Its crazy over here,
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Going to see families I haven't seen in a decade.
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My life temporarily shutdown
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And my dad's permanently approaching an end.
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And here I was contemplating the beginning of my future
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So I can be... the best that I could be...
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Now I understand migratory travel
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Like the bird migrating to her comfort zone,
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Unlike the bird scenting warm climate
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For a decade unable to bridge the divide
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Stuck within this cold weather.
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To be no longer an alien,
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We arrive  in Sunshine Nairobi!
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