poetry critical

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Random Poem:

What Am I??
eggenbegger

I am constantly trying to start something,
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even though it may possibly sting.
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Causing chaos and ruckus,
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killing almost every one of us.
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Calamity and destruction,
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constantly worth the reconstruction.
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awareness,
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somewhat you lack,
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I can't lay on my back.
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Here is a clue,
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do you know the cue?
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Bombs bursting and shouts to fire,
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when is this ever going to expire?
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Shrieks of pain and bereavement all around,
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It is such a terrible sound.
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The sweat and tears,
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trickle off their faces with horrifying fears,
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qualms of losing family,
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and uncertainties of losing terribly.
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Keeping silent isn't my strong suit,
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but I’ll shoot.
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Destroying everything in my path,
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I have made a blood bath.
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There is no beginning,
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and there is no end to me,
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but soon maybe,
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if you can catch up to me,
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destroying,
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is the only way designed for me to live contentedly.
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