poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Fucking man
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Fucking man
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I am losing my mind, well losing it more than usual
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You aren’t even handsome, in a conventional way
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Yet every day I am near you, I grow to want you more.
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I have spelt my feelings out, keeping defences in tact
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Just enough to preserve myself and you just tease me
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Not realising you are doing it, at least I hope you don’t.
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I see my world in your eyes and I want to claim it
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To seize it like a greedy creature, selfishly hungry
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And forbid beautiful women from tempting you away
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I am devastated when days, weeks pass, I miss you
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I want the words that I write to you to open a doorway
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But you let them slip through your fingers, like stale water.
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I want to lie with you, and hold you, explore you
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For you to make my life bearable, pleasurable, happy
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And the relentless loneliness to pass over me like a storm
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But you see through me, and I barely cast a shadow
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It hurts and makes everything grey and solemn
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You remain unaware but haunt my dreams, cloud my thoughts
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Give me my mind back!
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Fucking man!
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