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Random Poem:

The Debt and the Defence
Linnac

To whom it may concern or no,
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there is no concern who I owe.
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Those you hold in veneration
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have blunted down my generation.
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I protest. I’m not in debt.
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Great literary god, I plead, please let
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us tell our side of this debate,
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say that words now still are great.
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Giants we’re so fond of standing on
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yet reference others in the long run,
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so it is not such a grand crime
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if we borrow just a little rhyme.
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Remember, readers, every word you read –
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the same twenty-six letters mixed, indeed.
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We aren’t all inventive of new terms,
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for who would understand those jellyburms?
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So granted, I take for granted, my idioms
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are bound to be old hat or um-
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perhaps, with new technologies we could
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create company names, metonyms that should
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enlarge a rather short-sighted vocabulary
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and put an end to the death of originality.
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Yet I would say that though tropes are the same,
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never before have words been such a game
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and the ideas that have come before
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only inform ideas now all the more.
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Structure, sentence, predetermined previously,
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are there for editing if we take them seriously,
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but though we may seem to play and parry,
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authors writing are never seen to tarry
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and writing will move on from today,
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despite the debt to the canon we pay.
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