poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Poet's Hope.
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The best loved poems of the American people,
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The sacred cross of a church’s raised steeple
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– Both praised and respected; adored by all,
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Unlike my poems, so simple and small.
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The lovers cry and the poets dream
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Rip deep from beneath this body’s seam,
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Read by few, revered by less
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Unlike such jewels, the worldly possess–
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Failing to take heed, the border of the background’s stream
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Flowing through my spirit– a poet’s dream...
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For one to witness and love each written word,
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To hear the silence of sorrowful hours felt (my muse)
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To become this soldier’s piercing sword–
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One to dance with my pen,
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As ink flows across the page–
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As the morning sun and its glory take raise
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To be inspired by moonbeams
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Shining from this body’s cage
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Brilliance and genius– to be adored by all
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Is not what I ask for these poems, so small...
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So I sing out.
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I sing my stories for you–
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Tune this writing hand from singing blue.
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Like an angel taking flight by the bell that rings,
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One heart to love these words, would grant me my wings–
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For a muse, an emotional excuse to keep these rhymes aflow
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Is all the pen seeks to give the ink its glow.
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Not the sparkle of the world or their kisses so sweet
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It’s the hope for one whose golden eye will meet
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This poets words, impotently small
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To be read and truly adored by that one,
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Not by the false acceptance of “all”
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So I sing out.
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