poetry critical

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Random Poem:

And she never even knew
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"Friends forever," she said.
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"Friends forever," he said.
 2
Eight years old and they made the vow to remain friends forever.
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"I need room," she said.
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"I'll back away," he said.
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Ten years old and he made the vow to give each other space.
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"Does Tommy like me?" she asked.
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"I'll find out," he said.
 8
Twelve years old and he made the vow to find out if Tommy liked her.
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"He doesn't love me anymore," she said.
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"He doesn't deserve you," he said.
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Fourteen years old and he made the vow to love her forever.
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"Nobody loves me," she said.
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"I know someone who does," he said.
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Siteen years old and he made the vow to love her forever.
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"I'm getting married," she said.
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"I'll be there," he said.
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Eighteen years old and he made the vow to forever hold his peace.
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"I got divorced yesterday," she said.
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"I'm here for you," he said.
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Twenty years old and he made the vow to be there for her forever.
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"Why doesn't anyone love me?" she asked.
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"I have always loved you," he said.
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Twenty-two years old and he made the vow to keep on loving her.
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"I could never love you," she said.
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"I could never stop," he said.
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Twenty-four years old and he made the vow to never stop loving her again.
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"I can never see you again," she said.
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"I can never live again," he said.
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Twenty-six years old and he made the vow never to live again.
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"I'm sorry," she said.
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Twenty-eight years old and she made the vow as he lay in an open casket
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