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Random Poem:

Last Breeze
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As dutiful as guilty we stretched out our limbs to wrench old neighbour’s garden from Winter to Spring
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To do as if Farmers expert of land amateurs of husbandry of all those around
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Tools selected by inexpert eye shaded when intent was strong become crosses to hold, to harshly blister, when false wrapping removed and energy gone
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Back to job labourers returned as one, but still Brother fought Brother like pit fighting dogs
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Fury full cutting and digging at sods
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Uncapping last year’s graves the weapons like axes sliced through dock root
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The severing of dead man's fingers the sick cut roots weeping white protest our harsh violence
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The second wind of our endeavour, wet anorak smell and toil sweat mix with loam musk sexual and face dripping rain
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All steaming and panting to be of soil again
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Another axe falls on our game rude, old neighbour in silent appeared coat draped on head as if fitting for her shroud
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She felt she showed she was a stranger among young men and in name her dug ground both enthralled in Spring’s new rite in something she did not share
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The coffee came off-milk white as complexion but never lost dignity
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Both we Brothers embarrassed she had us wrong we have no call on that held preciously
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She rushes to hide clothes on the line and moves sole dinner for one as we hold the spades,forks and rakes that her husband left for his grave
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There are his plant pots and boots on sides reclaimed by webs like chattels in an ancestor's tomb, touchstones of a time long gone
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The drinks taken, thanks given walk back to scene of the crime
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Sprinkled sounds of Rugby played across Arden’s old forest land
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Desire gone all effort spent we glance and feign to dig now guilty again for our intrusion on a lonely woman her garden and wake
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As young I think this way, but goaded by the wind I hear the tall Oaks roar, chiding and warning
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They have there seen much before
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