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Random Poem:

Hopelessly Devoted
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I can’t take it anymore
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I can’t take not having you in my life
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The pain won’t stop
 3
The tears never end
 4
This heart of mine never stops loving you and wanting you
 5
 
 
I can’t come to my senses and let you go
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I can’t let you out of my life
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I let you out of my arms already and see where it left me
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My life has emptiness to it now
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The emptiness you once filled
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You used to be my world
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You used to be my happiness
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But that’s all gone now since you went away
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I would have and still would do anything for you
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Just say those words and I’d come running
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I wish I had it all back
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I wish I had never let you out of these arms
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I wish I had never had to say goodbye
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This is more than I could handle
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I don’t know how to deal with these emotions
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I don’t know how to make them go away
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I don’t know how to move on
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I don’t know how to let you go
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You are my everything
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You are my heart
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So how am I supposed to give you up now?
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How am I just supposed to let it all slip away?
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I never expected to fall in love with you
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I never expected to feel the things I feel
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I never expected to find someone who became my world
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I never expected for love to hurt so bad
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So now I’m left here
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Wishing and dreaming that the day will come
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The day you will come back to me
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The day I will regain my happiness and smile once more
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The day my heart wont hurt anymore
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Because I cant take it anymore
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I can’t take not having you in my life
 38
The pain won’t stop
 39
The tears never end
 40
This heart of mine never stops loving you and wanting you
 41
 
 
I guess I’m just hopelessly devoted to you!
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