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Random Poem:

The Death of a Friend
Peter

I paused,
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looking down on
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silent mortality.
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As all who knew him would say:
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He was always so strong, so witty,
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and so full of life.
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This place on which I looked
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was empty of it.
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Yes, that is his nose and his chin;
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And, yes, even his hands callused
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with his hard work.
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But this is not the man I knew.
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I reached down to touch his hand.
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His skin didn’t give under the pressure.
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Instead the whole arm shifted ever so slightly,
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in a way that seemed to me
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acutely unnatural.
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My nature recoiled
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demanding me to withdraw my hand.
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My will prevailed and
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as I held his hand
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I said good-bye.
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