poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

Your perfect little girl (revised) (again)

Your Perfect little girl
Doesnt think shes perfect at all,
Or that life is worth it anymore.
And wishes she was someone else,
She hates this world and herself.
Your Perfect little girl
Has scars hidden on her wrist,
As the blood drips over her fist,
She cries herself to sleep at night,
As she can no longer put up the fight.
Your Perfect little girl
Is slowly fading away,
But smiles through her broken day.
She isn't who you used to know,
She is trapped in her own world.
Your Perfect little girl
Sits alone razor in hand,
Wishes she had a different plan,
Tears fill her Perfect eyes.
Your Perfect little girl,
Committed suicide.

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