poetry critical

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Random Poem:

You took all that I have, but not my pride.
Promiscuous

You weren’t always the controlling type,
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At least not in the beginning.
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Because you were four years older, I reluctantly ran to you
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pouring my heart out about my abusive relationship.
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Your kind, perfect eyes led me to want more.
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I followed you hoping to find comfort,
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And comfort is not the only thing I found.
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You quickly learned my weaknesses and everything I loved.
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Flattering me with compliments,
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my pale cheeks would turn rosy.
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Long night phone calls and meaningful letters
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You spoke to me in a language I never heard before.
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You showed me another part of life that I have not yet entered.
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Taking advantage of my youth, you pushed your way into my heart
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And made moves too quickly for me to disregard.
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Betraying my past relationship of two years I am left behind
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To kick my mistaken shadows.
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Living in my guilt, you give me your love,
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Even though we both know your love caused my depression.
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You became more controlling and determined to lock me up.
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To lock me away from the world and away from happiness.
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Trying to walk away, I fell into a ditch too deep to get out of.
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You constantly scolded me for your problematic life and your mess ups.
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My voice decreases and I lose all sense of reasoning.
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The louder you scream
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The more I cry.
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I become hidden.
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The once indescribable feelings I had for you
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Are replaced with alcohol.
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My uncontrollable actions lead to a life of chaos and loneliness.
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While you cut me with your words I pack up my belongings
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Hate me for all the things I didn’t say to you
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Because now you are left alone.
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I'm heading for a new hope.
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