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Random Poem:

Petrarchan Sonnet: Season of Change
LauraMarie

Grateful am I for the warmth of your embrace,
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when once I gave no thought
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but focused on the trite, the bought
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rather than the light that leads my heart to a steady race.
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The season sweeps a kindness to your face,
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and the fall of leaves is not
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but a solemn reminder caught
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in the gutters. The fire continues to burn in your place.
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I tend to it, I await your return
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but your muffler, your footfalls don't sound
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and the wood and our dinner begins to burn--
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relatives' faces turned round and round
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from their smiles to frowns, they say
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without words: "Unlucky, your love has gone away."
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