poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

on losing you
behaev

i think i thought i knew you
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your lips like rosebuds
 2
and curious eyes.
 3
you called me simone
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and danced to my melody.
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you moulded your curves
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to fit around mine,
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held my hand
 8
and smiled.
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somewhere along the
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way i lost you
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to blue skies
 12
and red lips
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(lips like rosebuds),
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your sweetness swallowed
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whole.
 16
that three year itch had
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settled between your heavy brows,
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and festered.
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your curves are colder now,
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tragedy rains in your sky.
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a blonde-haired boy who laughed
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one summer.
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we could have fixed you
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but someday never comes.
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