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Random Poem:

Hungry For a Fight
joelala

The wind whipped wildly that night.
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Telephone wires and tree branches alike
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Were waving in the air like kites.
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But I wasn’t wavering,
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I was too busy savoring the flavoring of this particular evening.
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Even if it was dangerous,
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I wasn’t leaving.
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For there was too much to get done,
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And just enough time to do it.
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“I knew it”
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He said, but I wasn’t tuned into it.
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“Lay a finger on me and your dead”
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And at this something snapped in me.
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Like a bull seeing red I put my head down and charged,
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Planting my fist in his kidney.
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“Don’t kid me” he chuckled
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as three other goons barged through the door.
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Big and brass knuckled
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It became evident
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That I had a date with the floor.
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I looked at that door
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But there was no getting out.
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Then sure enough, I was down for the count.
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The amount of pain was amazing
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As I lay there still.
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My appetite for a fight just might get me killed.
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