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Random Poem:

I am Jack's intense hate...
AEOS

If you saw god,
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what would you do?
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Would you run from the hilltops
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screaming that you have the divine right
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to sin and be forgiven?
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Or would you keep it a secret?
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something between you and god,
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something between you and your soul.
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You could search for a
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concrete reason
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all you want.
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Good luck finding one.
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Preists tell me to search in my soul.
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That's about the most standard
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and unoriginal
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answer I've ever heard.
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Search in my soul,
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search for jesus,
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find god,
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find salvation...
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and search in my heart.
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The heart is a fucking muscle.
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I might as well go digging around
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in my lungs
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while I'm at it.
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Why even bother?
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God won't learn.
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He'll just sit up in heaven... or wherever he lives.
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0007 Babylon Road?
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You can pray all you want;
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try to get into heaven.
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You might as well pray to your kitchen counter;
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because we're not going anywhere.
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He moved in on the first day,
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infiltrated on the second,
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killed innocent people on the third,
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cleaned up their brains on the fourth,
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watched them rot on the fifth,
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laughed at their disgrace on the sixth.
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...and on the seventh day,
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he sat back and admired his work.
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