poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome!

Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

in the snow
DeformedLion

he says girl der ner ner ner you'll
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be a ma-aan soon. blah blah, blah blah.
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so crystal sky lights up, monolith
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frowns at big ball in sun mits
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blowing up black
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balloon, float shrapnel, float!
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  hers, to his.
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that the whorl of urine meets the
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same with more splash than slide,
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kind of liquid stream:
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azure. meaning white clouds
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razed vermillion, sky--
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outie, skin cut, old
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and febrile...vericose
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veins dot across your eyes,
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                            mine too.
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  here are the his. the his
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  is smiling at such
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  awkward possesion.
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  skirts and trousers.
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the sun gets fumbled - drunk stars -
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darkness. darkness. oh hail body,
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oh hail boy!
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   in the snow.
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