poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Black Wind
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As you cry out in pain after you tumble on the rocky road, I see. I see that as the clouds run off the sky, as the clear condensation seeps into your nappy, mud filled hair, you cry.
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You cry as the red blood runs down your leg, you cry as the sky darkens and you must find a way home. You even cry as you realize only this empty road can hear your cries.
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There are no stars as the wind sweeps away leaves on the rough path. There are no colors as the clouds move across the sky and cover up the moon.
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A once pink dress now in shreds and shambles, a once blonde head of hair now turned brown with the mud. Once sparkling emerald green eyes now dull as winters leaves.
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Tiny footprints are all you’ve left behind as the black wind carries you away.
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