poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

She Made Sure To Break The Branches
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I can't really tell what's coming
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Anymore.
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It's the "what's going" that really gets me.
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The falling asleep at four A.M. evenings,
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Only to wake up around three wondering,
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“Was I alone during the slumber?
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Or drunkenly draped over another?”
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That’s for her to decide
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and for me to forget.
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Your body movements in the bookstore said,
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“I've got your good intentions gutted.
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And like a fish,
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laid upon a table
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to be thrown in with the rest of the scraps.
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Leave before I break your legs
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and you’re left in my web,
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you amateur.”
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For such a beautiful girl,
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I would have never guessed that you would shit on my spotless record.
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