poetry critical

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can go ahead and get started!

Random Poem:

One Guys Life

How could it be so messed up?
How could a single guys life,
Be so full of pain a guilt.
Could it be that he....
He has betrayed every friend he has ever had?
Could it be that he....
He can never get a break and just be mad?
Could it be that he....
He can't have a situation to get ahead?
Could it be that he....
He cant seem to win but loose instead?
Could it be that he....
Doesnt know what to do or say?
Could it be that he....
Instead of recieving has to just pay?
Why is it that one guy....
A guy that seem to be so content,
Live with the choice he has made,
When ever choice is bent,
And for ever mistake he has payed.
They say life is full of choices,
You must pay for the path you choose.
Everyone guides you with their voices,
When in the end we all seem to loose?
Everyone has a day when the break.
Some will help a friend and give,
Most will help a friend and take,
Few help actually help you live.
One guys life...
How excactly does it matter....?

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