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Nastia: The Summer Swan
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O, that swans could ever swim smooth waters
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And falter not, flowing fair and regal
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With eager ripples radiating back
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And back from those blossoming in blest youth.
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In truth, the foreign swan of whom I speak
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To our waters did she speed from far North,
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High, meager lands; born a Russian beauty,
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No lack of lofty goals and lively dreams—
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—(repaired agricultural practices;
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      designation of employment for youths;
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      rebuilt state of her motherhood country)…
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Stately ideals all. And then came the crash.
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Belief brewed slow. Lashes framed wide swan eyes,
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Formed fragmented lies of deep, startled calm—
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Crushed was the balm of grace, her ebbing blood
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Waned to nothing in that young swan wrist
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My pressed fingertips plied hesitant,
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For so pleasantly she peered to sky, slain,
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A swan swept north to where she now belongs.
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