poetry critical

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Random Poem:

Once...
Cali

Upon a time there were a thousand books of old.
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Tales of fairies, little elves,
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courageous deeds and magic spells.
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Each tale a woven world of wonder,
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each page was laced with gold.
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A thousand writers each would tell
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a different story to weave this spell.
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With a puff of smoke and a swirl of mist,
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a lock of hair will seal this tryst.
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But now the nights are silent;
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and the land is dark and cold.
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No swish of dragon's wings to hear,
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no fairy kings of old.
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Now the books tell of guns,
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of wars, Martians and burning suns.
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There was a time when pages were gold,
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filled with spidery writing mysteries behold.
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Since then the books have lost their wonder,
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the golden pages were torn asunder.
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The tales they wrote were twisted and moulded,
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Snipped and stripped, torn and folded.
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Until this gathering, no longer a tryst
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turned the tales into something like this...
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Cinderella grew old and died,
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the witch forgot her spell.
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Sleeping Beauty went mouldy inside,
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and Rapunzel is rotting in Hell.
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