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Random Poem:

The Dying Eyes of The Angel
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The Angel watches and her tears fall down
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as the gates of Heaven are burned to the ground.
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The streets of gold are charcoal black
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and the flames are rising and she can't turn back.
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The battle for Heaven was lost tonight.
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Darkness has prevailed and we couldn't even fight.
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Her wings have fallen, so she tries to crawl away.
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The Angel watches asher tower falls down.
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The echoes of misery are covering the sounds.
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Her halo disappears as she watches this insanity.
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A dream pf sadness jas beem brought to a reality.
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These pearly gates have never fallen
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until the day that their God came calling.
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So now the ashes of the city of gold
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are briged by hatred and a heart of cold.
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I've seen things I wish to never see again.
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The screaming pains of those once loved
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and I don't know if I could ever see again,
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the dying eyes of an Angel.
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