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Random Poem:

felching
killjoy

you will find this practiced,
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when you come looking,
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in the grimey-tiled truckstop
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bathrooms of Hiram,
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the various phrases of your life
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repeating on the walls around you:
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"suck Here"
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"fuk u ngrs"
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"call me"
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and, conversely, the Dunwoody
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Better Homes and Gardens,
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their front-yard petunias
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turned up to grin like blind babies,
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wives being fucked in front of windows
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by the camp director/lifeguards.
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you will discover that the flavors,
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when mixed, taste like a bloom,
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or a startled cry.  they taste like
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blowing bubbles at the beach.
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(you are, in fact, sucking on what
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could have been a someone.)  
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the backdoor, though--
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this tastes like that
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pseudo-ice-cream-truck
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stuff you dropped and smeared
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on the asphalt.  it tastes mean,
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like squealing tires at a funeral.
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you will gag at the thought,
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choke, curl up your lip,
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paw at the pillows to stuff the sound
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like a brat, like a hangover,
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but be drawn to it, the plunging
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and extraction, because,
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as you've always believed,
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as you've seen, expected,
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known in the faces of a godless
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generation:
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perversion
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removes
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all mystery.
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