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Random Poem:

I Am
godisnowhere

I am
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The dream that you have
 2
When your falling and calling
 3
For help but there's no one around.
 4
You scream
 5
You try to grab something
 6
There's nothing
 7
So you hit the ground.
 8
 
 
I am
 9
The feeling you get
 10
When there's someone behind you
 11
You turn and there's no one around.
 12
I am
 13
The chills up your spine
 14
When you scream
 15
Yet you dont' make a sound.
 16
 
 
I am
 17
The shadows and darkness
 18
That swallow you whole
 19
When your soul is nowhere to be found
 20
I am
 21
The demon inside you
 22
And I'll burn all your
 23
Hope to the ground
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:Chorus:
 25
Hear the voices in your brain
 26
Assuring you that your insane
 27
When the silence seems so loud
 28
Who the fuck's gonna save you now?
 29
 
 
I am
 30
Sick of the lies
 31
The deception the hurt
 32
And the pain
 33
Your voice is killing me softly
 34
So fuck it just bring on the rain.
 35
 
 
I am
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The road that you take
 37
When they say that the going
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Is rough
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I am
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The blood you will shed
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When you decide that enough
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Is enough.
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:Chorus:
 44
 
 
I am
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The final solution
 46
The one thing that
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Keeps you alive
 48
I am
 49
The throats you will slit
 50
When its time
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To do or die.
 52
 
 
:Chorus x 2:
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